Academic Excellence: Design your own challenge
Create A Story at least 5 Chapters long.
Chapter One
As I stumbled to the ground in tears all I could hear was laughter. Oh maybe I should Introduce myself my name is Tom, I live in Iceland, Europe. I moved here not long ago because my Dad got a job here it was a very good deal so he couldn't turn it down. We packed our bags and left within five days, he didn't let me have a say in this at all so all I got to do was so good bye to all my friends and leave. Being the new guy here isn't easy all the kids are picking on me and calling me names. I haven't even gone to school yet, I hope the kids who live down my road don't go to the same school.
"Rise and shine it's the first day of school." My dad explained in a calm voice. As I grumbled out of bed I had a feeling that today was going to be a bad day, I knew that all the kids would pick on me. I know why they pick on me there are lots of reasons, it is just not fair. I am short and stubby, don't have all the latest gear and I am new.
Chapter Two
As I walked into the school gate a shiver went up my spine I knew that this was going to go down hill real fast. As I noticed a familier face I tried to avoid him, it was Peter he lives down my road he is one of the most annoying people I know. He isn't mean but there are a lot of other things wrong with him. Like his high pitched voice and his annoying allergies. I think that he wants to be my friend but if I talk to him I may get laughed at for hanging out with a guy like him. I need to try and find the right friends so then I can get a good reputation, and become the schools cool kid. I tried to look around for someone who I could make friends with. Just as I noticed a tall sporty looking guy, the bell went and everyone entered class.
I wasn't sure where to sit and what to do since I had never been to this school and I was the new guy. As I looked around the class for a seat that wasn't near Peter but just as I was about to sit in a seat the teacher walked in and told me to come up the front. As I turned around to say 'sure in a second.' a girl walked in and sat in my seat. The only seat left was right next to Peter in the most disgusting seat at the back of the class. As the teacher started introducing me to the class I turned and looked at the girl who took my seat she was the most beautiful girl I had ever seen, she had blond hair, blue eyes and she looked very charming.
Chapter Three
As I turned away from her I noticed that I had been staring with my mouth wide open, the whole class was laughing. When I walked to the back of the class to take a seat Peter gave me a present and told me that he made it last night for me. When I opened it up I saw all these tooth picks stuck together into the shape of a circle. As I tried to smile back at him and thank him the teacher yelled and told us wether we would like to share what we have been discussing, and of course Peter yelled yes. Miss Gollip told us to come up the front and bring what ever was in our hands so that is exactly what I did. I started to mumble what it was and then all of a sudden the Principal walked in. I was trying to hid the present from Peter behind my back but the Principal noticed it and said 'Peter always gives the new students at our school a gift he is a top A student and a great role model.' The children in the class started to giggle lightly.
"OK, back to work everyone." Miss Gollip Said. As I went back and sat down in my seat, I continued with my work. I kept on getting distracted by laughter in front of us it was the girls. I wanted to know wether they were talking about me or what they were on about.
Chapter Four
At the end of the day I noticed a whole bunch people walking across the road and there she was standing there giggling with her friends, I noticed that I should make a plan so that I can catch up with her, but then Peter came over. He asked me what I was doing after school and wether I wanted to catch up with him. I slowly said no I have to do something and then ran off the way that the group of girls went.
As I was running I was trying to think how could I figure out her name, and most of all how could I talk to her. I had one more problem I had no friends. I stopped in the middle of the road and looked around for a person that I could be friends with. Thats when I noticed a guy from class, he was very quiet and he seemed to not be bothered by me. I thought for a minute and then walked up to him and asked wether we could be mates, he said yes and then we walked off.
Chapter Five
The next day at school I walked up to the girls with my mate Jack. I asked her, her name and asked wether she would like to come hang out with us later and she replied with a yes and then gave me her number.
When we were walking out of school she ran up to me and said that I was really cool and wished me the best for my new life and that she would like to hang out some more and maybe get a little bit closer. I agreed and we all lived happily ever after...
THE END
Good story. You created a realistic character with a real problem - no friends on the first day at a new school. To improve this story, the solution to the problem needs to be more believable. Why did the girl just happen to run up to him and instantly fall in love with him? The problem with Peter, the uncool friend is not really solved.
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