Persuasive Letter

Dear Milly,
I am here to persuade you to come and join swimming. I think that you should join swimming because everybody at one stage needs to learn to swim in life. I have been swimming for two years and I enjoy it lots now. There are heaps of different stages at our swimming club. We have four different types of groups. There is one for little kids who can't even swim yet, there is another for the people who can swim but not that confidently. Then we have a group which there are quite a few swimmers in this group is for the kids who can do 100meters none stop and are not competitive. The last group is the top group which I am in every 1 hour and 30 minute session the coach does a dry land set, and then he does heaps of different sets in the water that adds up to 3 or 4k. You should join Tauranga Swimming club because we have heaps of fun little meets like chocolate fish night, and club champs which is where you swim the fastest and try and come first in your age group to get trophies and medals. I think that you should join swimming because it is a fun and competitive experience.

Hockey isn't a very enjoyable sport and you can get injured very easily. I think that swimming is more enjoyable and fun to do. Also you get to go around the bay of plenty to heaps of meets, and sometimes the whole of New Zealand. Thats why I think that you should join swimming!!!